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I went to visit
Our deserted, moonlit place.
Yeah, I miss you too.
©2008-2009 ~Abbi456
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She screamed 'Why? Whywhywhywhywhywhy…' She knew the answer to the question, yet she still begged for others to tell her something different. No one replied, and silence ensued.

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:icondkhutcheson:
Wow, this is saddening. But beautiful.

Is it a haiku?
:iconabbi456:
I'm pretty sure. 5/7/5, right?

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:icondkhutcheson:
Mhm, 80 I keep reading your second line as 8 though.
:iconabbi456:
That looks better. Thanks!

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:icondkhutcheson:
Glad I could help. x) It's such a lovely poem.
:iconnumber1supermodel:
you are bizarre. Cheese!
:iconabbi456:
It's not cheese. It's a place.

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:iconnumber1supermodel:
i thought queso meant cheese?
:iconabbi456:
It does, but it's also the name of a place.

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